안개 낀 날, 2시까지 곱창 손질 후 짧은 테이블 파트, 동료의 부탁으로 짧은 영어 쓰기 등

today was so foggyed..

i waited korean workers car.

she little late because foggy i understood.

and i arrived and started work.

i worked small intestine remover.

usually i was so hard lifting the stomach.. but today was so easy. maybe i find easy method.

my work was not bad!

and first lunch time i was invited korean girls group. because japanese coworker took a vacation.

they competition go on a diet.

So next week, most less weight person must buy the dinner. Haha.

and finish lunch time. i worked continue.

cripton(?) who new table worker worked window part. but he look so very hard. So he didn't put down the intestine.

So i played. but he saw me. he want to changed position to me... So i ignored haha.

and restarted work. easy money.

and after second lunch, i changed position 2pm.

i worked table part. and finished.

while went to the car. i went to the information center. i asked employee sent my team mate liz's meassage. and came back home.


재미나이 번역본

​🇰🇷 1. 수정된 한글 번역
​오늘 하루는 정말 안개가 자욱했다.
​한국인 직원의 차를 기다렸는데, 안개 때문에 그 친구가 조금 늦었다. 날씨 때문이니 충분히 이해할 수 있었다.
​직장에 도착해서 일을 시작했다. 오늘 내가 맡은 일은 소창(소의 소장)을 제거하는 일이었다. 보통은 위를 들어 올리는 게 너무 힘들었는데, 오늘은 웬일인지 정말 쉽게 느껴졌다. 아마 쉽게 하는 노하우(요령)를 터득한 것 같다. 오늘 일은 꽤 할 만했다!
​첫 번째 점심시간에는 한국인 동료들 무리에 초대받아 같이 밥을 먹었다. 평소 같이 먹던 일본인 동료가 휴가를 갔기 때문이다. 다들 다이어트 내기를 하고 있었는데, 다음 주에 살을 가장 못 뺀 사람이 저녁을 사야 한다고 했다. 하하.
​점심시간이 끝나고 계속 일을 이어갔다. 작업대 쪽으로 새로 온 '크립톤(Cripton)'이라는 직원이 창문 쪽 파트를 맡았는데, 보기에도 엄청 힘들어 보였다. 일이 밀려서 내장을 제때 아래로 내려놓지 못할 정도였다. 덕분에 내 쪽은 손이 비어서 잠시 쉬고 있었는데, 그 친구가 나를 보더니 자리를 바꾸고 싶어 했다. 하지만 난 그냥 모른 척했다. 하하. 그리고 다시 일을 시작했다. 완전 꿀 빠는 기분(Easy money)이었다.
​두 번째 점심시간이 지나고 오후 2시에 파트를 바꿨다. 이번엔 작업대(Table) 파트에서 일하다가 하루 일과를 마쳤다.
​차로 가던 길에 안내 데스크에 들렀다. 직원에게 우리 팀원인 리즈의 메시지를 전해주고, 집으로 돌아왔다.
​🇺🇸 2. 자연스러운 영어 표현 (일기/대화체)
​It was so foggy today.
​I waited for a Korean coworker’s car. She was a little late because of the fog, which I completely understood.
​Once I arrived, I started my shift. My job today was removing small intestines. Usually, lifting the stomachs is really hard work, but today was so easy. I think I finally found a better, easier method! My shift went pretty well.
​During our first lunch break, I was invited to join a group of Korean girls because my Japanese coworker was on vacation. They are having a weight loss competition right now. Whoever loses the least amount of weight by next week has to buy everyone dinner! Haha.
​After lunch, I went back to work. A new table worker named Cripton was working the window section, but he seemed to be struggling a lot. He couldn't keep up with putting the intestines down. Because of that, I had some downtime and was just chilling, but he saw me. He wanted to swap positions with me, but I just ignored him, haha. Then I got back to work. It was easy money!
​After the second lunch break, I switched positions at 2 PM to work the table section, and then I finished my shift.
​On my way to the car, I stopped by the information center. I passed along a message from my teammate, Liz, to the employee there, and then I came back home.
​🇺🇸 3. 조금 더 깔끔하고 정돈된 영어 표현
​The weather was incredibly foggy today.
​I waited for my Korean coworker to pick me up. She was a bit late due to the fog, which was totally understandable.
​As soon as I arrived, I began working as a small intestine remover. Lifting the stomachs is usually very physically demanding, but today felt so easy. I think I’ve figured out a shortcut or a better technique. Overall, work went smoothly!
​For the first lunch break, I joined a group of Korean coworkers since my Japanese colleague was away on vacation. They told me they are having a weight loss challenge. Next week, the person who has lost the least weight has to treat everyone to dinner. Haha.
​When lunch ended, I continued working. A new table worker, Cripton, was stationed at the window, and he looked like he was having a really hard time. He couldn't manage to put the intestines down on time. This left me with nothing to do for a bit, but he noticed me and wanted to switch places. I just ignored him. Haha. When work started up again, it felt like easy money.
​After the second lunch break, I moved over to the table section at 2 PM and finished the rest of my shift there.
​While heading to my car, I went to the information desk. I delivered a message from my teammate, Liz, to the staff member, and then I headed home.
​💡 바뀐 부분 포인트!
​살을 가장 못 뺀 사람: The person who loses the least weight 또는 Whoever loses the least amount of weight로 수정되어 '꼴찌가 밥을 산다'는 의미가 정확해졌습니다.
​리즈의 메시지를 전해줌: I passed along a message from my teammate, Liz, to the employee로 수정하여, 내가 리즈의 메시지를 받아서 직원에게 전달해 준 주체임이 확실하게 표현되었습니다