공장(꿀), 여성의 날 햄버거, 태국친구와 대화

I did woke up and I went to the factory.

arrived and start work.

I moved and organized many binilbags.

today was so not busy.

because write room one part didn't work.

So my partner Liang spoke me. today is honey. Haha

and I met Japan worker. actually I did know she korean. she look like korean and she's korean well. but she live in Australia for 2years. and studied here. I was suprised.

today is woman's day. So I ate chicken hamburger. but I appointed because here is beef factory. So I want to fresh beef. TT

anyway today work finished.

and came back and played duolingo and work out squat and shoulder.

and I did eat dinner.

my Thailand friend studied car's 이론.

So we talked many thing(car exam, house, english etc)
especially I talked her my worried.

my worried all english... my friend told me if i listening english continue, suddenly understand anything. the time usually 6month...

but my time is 2month leaf...

but she didn't understand. because english skill level up need long time, all people different So don't worry. I agreed...


재미나이 번역본

자고 일어나서 공장에 갔어. 도착해서 바로 일을 시작했지. 비닐봉지들을 많이 옮기고 정리했어. 오늘은 별로 안 바빴는데, '라이트 룸(Write room/White room)' 구역이 오늘 쉬는 날이었거든. 그래서 내 파트너인 량이 나한테 '오늘 완전 꿀이다!'라고 하더라. 하하.
​그리고 일본인 동료를 만났어. 한국인처럼 생겼고 한국말도 잘해서 사실 한국인인 줄 알았어. 근데 호주에서 2년 동안 살면서 공부했대서 정말 놀랐지.
​오늘이 '여성의 날'이라 치킨 버거를 먹었어. 하지만 좀 아쉬웠어. 여긴 소고기 공장이잖아! 신선한 소고기가 먹고 싶었거든. ㅠㅠ
​아무튼 일을 마치고 집에 와서 듀오링고도 하고 스쿼트랑 어깨 운동도 했어. 그리고 저녁을 먹었지. 내 태국 친구는 운전면허 이론 공부를 하고 있었고, 우린 시험이나 집, 영어 같은 여러 주제로 이야기를 나눴어.
​특히 내 베스트 프렌드가 해줬던 조언에 대해 얘기했어. 내 베프가 그러는데, 영어를 계속 듣다 보면 어느 순간 갑자기 들리는 때가 온대. 보통 그게 6개월 정도 걸린다고 하더라고. 근데 나한테는 이제 2달밖에 안 남아서 걱정이야. 하지만 태국 친구는 사람마다 실력이 느는 속도가 다르니 걱정하지 말라고 위로해줬고, 나도 그 말에 동의했어."
​2. 영어 번역 (Natural & Revised)
​I woke up and headed to the factory. As soon as I arrived, I got to work.
​I moved and organized a lot of plastic bags. It wasn't busy at all today because one part of the room (the write room) was closed for the day. My partner, Liang, told me, "Today is honey (so easy)!" Haha.
​I also met a Japanese coworker. I actually thought she was Korean because she looks like one and speaks the language so well. I was surprised to find out she has lived and studied in Australia for two years.
​Since it was International Women's Day, I had a chicken burger. But I was a bit disappointed because this is a beef factory, and I was craving fresh beef! TT
​Anyway, work finished, and I came back home. I did my Duolingo and worked out (squats and shoulders). Then I had dinner.
​My Thai friend was studying for her driving theory test, so we talked about many things like the exam, housing, and English. I especially talked about my worries regarding my English.
​My best friend told me that if I keep listening to English, I'll suddenly understand everything one day, usually around the 6-month mark. But I only have two months left, so I’m worried.
​My Thai friend told me not to worry because everyone’s level increases at a different pace. I agreed with her.
​💡 주요 수정 포인트
​"It was a day off": 고장(broken)이 아니라 쉬는 날(closed/day off)로 바꿨습니다.
​"My best friend": 조언을 해준 사람은 'Best friend'로, 옆에서 위로해준 사람은 'Thai friend'로 명확히 구분했습니다.
​"2 months left": 'leaf' 대신 남았다는 뜻의 'left'를 사용했습니다.