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today was my holiday.
because i use the sick leave the factory at first time!
 
 
i woke up 6am and played duolingo.
 
and i ate a ramen and i took a nap.
 
and i woke up. and i played 4x4x4 cube.
 
and a little watched english video. i had boring time today.....
 
i corrected my cube first. but 4x4x4 was very difficult...
 
i had a dinner and took a rest.
 
i worked out late time(22pm) a lot of push up than usually.
because my shoulder was pain. So dips very hard.
 
 

재미나이 번역

Today was my day off because I used my sick leave at the factory for the first time!
I woke up at 6 AM and started my day with Duolingo. After eating some ramen, I went back to sleep for a nice nap. When I woke up again, I spent some time practicing the 4x4x4 cube. I also watched a few English videos. Honestly, I felt a little bored today, but maybe that's what a holiday is for.
I managed to solve the cube, but the 4x4x4 was much more difficult than I expected! After that, I had dinner and just relaxed.
I worked out quite late, around 10 PM. Since my shoulder was hurting, doing dips was too difficult, so I did a lot more push-ups than usual instead."

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💡 주요 표현 및 수정 사항

• "I use the sick leave the factory at first time" → "I used my sick leave at the factory for the first time"
  • '처음으로'라고 할 때는 **'for the first time'**이라는 표현을 씁니다.
• "I corrected my cube" → "I solved the cube"
  • 큐브를 다 맞췄을 때는 'Correct'보다 **'Solve'**라는 단어를 사용합니다.
• "22pm" → "10 PM"
  • 영어권에서는 24시간제(22:00)보다는 10 PM 형식을 더 일상적으로 사용합니다.
• "My shoulder was pain" → "My shoulder was hurting" 또는 "I had shoulder pain"
  • 'Pain'은 명사이므로, 상태를 말할 때는 **'hurting'**이나 **'sore'**를 쓰는 것이 자연스럽습니다.

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🇰🇷 한국어 번역

"오늘은 휴일이었다. 공장에 들어온 후 처음으로 병가를 냈기 때문이다!
아침 6시에 일어나 듀오링고를 했다. 라면을 먹고 나서 다시 낮잠을 잤다. 자고 일어나서는 4x4x4 큐브를 가지고 놀았다. 영어 영상도 조금 봤다. 오늘은 좀 지루한 시간을 보냈는데, 사실 이게 휴일의 묘미인 것 같다.
결국 큐브를 맞추긴 했지만, 4x4x4는 생각보다 훨씬 어려웠다! 그 후에는 저녁을 먹고 휴식을 취했다.
밤 10시쯤 늦게 운동을 시작했다. 어깨가 아파서 딥스를 하기가 너무 힘들었기에, 대신 평소보다 훨씬 많은 양의 푸쉬업을 했다."