new house inspection

I arrived factory. arrived message.

briana's message.

she angred me because remote air-conditioning.  I didn't remote So I feel wronged and angry

yesterday work is fine.

came in new ofal member.

28old korean guy and 16old Australia boy.

Korean guy came in last May.

I teach lifting and Aortic liposuction the him

It was his first time, but he did really well.

finished work.

I answered the briana's message.

I said. I endured the cold out of consideration for you, but you continue to doubt me. Shouldn't you at least say sorry?

she didn't answer.

I arrived home. I didn't open the door because door outside looked.

I sent a message open the door for briana

she opened the window and Without even saying hello

I'm very angry.


I did inspection new share house.

the house was good, oner was kind. rent pee was cheep.

On the way home

I did shopping.

and comeback home.

I need to move house.

 

재미나이 번역본

I arrived at the factory and saw a message from Briana.

She was angry with me again about the air conditioning remote. I haven't even touched the remote, so I felt wronged and angry.

Work yesterday was fine. We had two new members join the offal room: a 28-year-old Korean guy and a 16-year-old Australian boy. The Korean guy arrived in Australia last May. I taught him how to do the lifting and aortic fat removal (Aortic liposuction). Even though it was his first time, he did a really great job.

After finishing work, I finally replied to Briana’s message. I told her, "I’ve been enduring the cold to be considerate of you, but you keep doubting me. Don't you think you should at least apologize?" She hasn't replied yet.

When I arrived home, I couldn't get in because the door was locked from the inside. I messaged Briana to open it. She just opened the window without even saying hello. I was incredibly angry.

Later, I went to inspect a new share house. The house was great, the owner was kind, and the rent was cheap. On my way back, I did some grocery shopping. I've decided—I definitely need to move out.

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2. 우리말 번역

공장에 도착했는데 브리아나에게 메시지가 와 있었어요.

그녀는 에어컨 리모컨 문제로 또 저에게 화를 냈습니다. 저는 리모컨을 만지지도 않았는데 말이죠. 정말 억울하고 화가 났습니다.

어제 업무는 괜찮았어요. 내장실(offal room)에 새 멤버 두 명이 들어왔거든요. 28살 한국인 남자분과 16살 호주 소년이었어요. 한국인 분은 지난 5월에 호주에 왔다고 하더라고요. 제가 그분에게 리프팅과 대동맥 지방 제거(Aortic liposuction) 작업을 가르쳐줬습니다. 처음인데도 정말 잘하시더라고요.

일을 마치고 드디어 브리아나의 메시지에 답장을 했습니다. "나는 너를 배려해서 추위를 참아왔는데, 너는 계속 나를 의심하는구나. 적어도 미안하다고는 해야 하는 거 아니니?"라고 보냈어요. 그녀는 아직 답이 없네요.

집에 도착했는데 문이 안에서 잠겨 있어서 들어갈 수가 없었어요. 브리아나에게 문을 열어달라고 메시지를 보냈습니다. 그녀는 인사도 없이 창문만 덜컥 열어주더군요. 정말 너무 화가 났습니다.

그 후 새 셰어하우스 인스펙션을 하러 갔어요. 집도 좋고 주인도 친절한데 방세도 저렴하더라고요. 돌아오는 길에 장을 좀 봤습니다. 결심했어요. 저는 정말 이사를 가야겠습니다.

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💡 유용한 표현 및 팁

• Aortic liposuction (Aortic fat removal): 'Liposuction'은 보통 의학적인 '지방 흡입'을 뜻하지만, 공장에서 지방을 제거하는 작업임을 설명할 때 쓰신 의도가 충분히 전달됩니다. 더 자연스럽게는 fat removal이나 trimming the fat이라고 할 수 있습니다.
• I feel wronged: '억울하다'는 표현으로 아주 적절하게 잘 쓰셨어요!
• Locked from the inside: '문이 밖에서 잠겨 보였다'는 상황을 '안에서 잠겨 있었다'는 뜻의 이 표현으로 바꾸면 더 자연스럽습니다.
• Rent fee (X) → Rent (O): 방세나 임대료는 간단히 Rent라고만 해도 충분합니다.