곱창손질하다 한번씩 테이블 도와줌, 한명 부상으로 빠져서 내일 어떻게 되려나... 머리 염색 2차

i started small intestine remove.

Antony Who table worker changed the position.

he hurted his finger..

So i worried. i helped table work total 3rd.. very short time help but tomorrow will i don't know...

table work is very hard....

started lunch time, We ate lunch and took a break long time because machine broken.

and i gave a new office guide book. and We education for change the rule.

and i accidentally knew my korean workers hometown.

that city is i did live in city..

So We both suprised.

and again work. i was sick of it...


and started second lunch time.

my korean mate said us last time happen story.

liang(?) shouting bad word them.

because always finish machine, out of the clean stomachs. So maybe don't close the machine entrance, They have to said sign to customer liang.. So They did.
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and then liang said "broken the machine" and said strong mandarin...

So she aksed what mean, another chinese workers.

thats mean is mother fucker...

i was suprised..

liang is very cold person. but i didn't know he said.......

anyway finished lunch time.

i worked..

and before 30minute finish work.

mess please me change the position..

So i agreed. and i worked table position.

and finished work, and shopping the coles.(hair change cream, chicken ETC...)

and came back home and i worked out at the park.

almost finish, my girlfriend came me because picked up me.

We did shopping and came back home.

and i ate a dinner and dyed my hair

very felt hot and pain Haha....



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Grammar Corrected Version (원래 작성하신 문장의 틀을 살린 교정)
​I started the small intestine removal line. Antony, a table worker, changed his position because he hurt his finger. Honestly, I wasn't worried about him, but I was worried that I would keep doing the table work. I helped with the table work a total of 3 times. It was for a very short time, but I don't know about tomorrow. Table work is very hard...
​It started at lunch time. We ate lunch and took a long break because the machine was broken. And I was given a new office guide book, and we had training for the changed rules. And I accidentally found out my Korean co-worker's hometown. That city is the city where I used to live. So we were both surprised. And again back to work. I was sick of it...
​And the second lunch time started. My Korean mate told us a story that happened last time. Liang always expects workers to give a sign to close the entrance after all the clean stomachs come out. But this time, Liang was angry, saying "The machine is broken, so it won't close!" and said strong words in Mandarin. So she asked another Chinese worker what it meant. That meant "motherfucker"... I was surprised. Liang is a very cold person, but I didn't know he would say that...
​Anyway, lunch time finished. I worked... and 30 minutes before finishing work, the supervisor asked me to change position. So I agreed, and I worked at the table position.
​And after finishing work, I went shopping at Coles (hair bleach, chicken, etc...). And I came back home and worked out at the park. When I was almost finished, my girlfriend came to pick me up. We did some shopping and came back home. And I ate dinner and bleached my hair. It felt very hot and painful Haha...
​3. 한글 번역 (수정본)
​오늘 소장 작업 라인을 시작했다. 안토니라는 테이블 워커가 손가락을 다치는 바람에 포지션을 변경해야 했다. 사실 그 친구가 걱정되기보다는 내가 앞으로 계속 이 테이블 작업을 하게 될까 봐 걱정이 되었다. 오늘 총 세 번 정도 테이블 작업을 도왔다. 아주 잠깐 돕긴 했지만 내일은 어떻게 될지 모르겠다. 테이블 작업은 정말 너무 힘들다...
​점심시간쯤 되어 밥을 먹고, 기계가 고장 나는 바람에 아주 길게 휴식을 취했다. 쉴 때 새로운 오피스 가이드북을 받았고, 바뀐 규칙에 대한 교육도 받았다. 그리고 우연히 한 한국인 워커의 고향을 알게 되었는데, 알고 보니 내가 살았던 도시였다! 우리 둘 다 너무 놀랐다. 그리고 다시 일 시작. 정말 일하기 싫어 죽는 줄 알았다...
​그리고 두 번째 점심시간이 시작됐다. 한국인 동료가 지난번에 있었던 일화를 얘기해 주었다. 원래는 깨끗한 위(stomachs)가 다 빠지고 나면 워커들이 문을 닫으라고 량(Liang)에게 신호를 주는데, 이번에는 량이 화를 내면서 "기계가 고장 나서 문 안 닫힌다"고 만다린어로 심한 욕을 했다는 것이다. 동료가 나중에 다른 중국인 워커에게 그게 무슨 뜻이냐고 물어봤더니, "X새끼(motherfucker)"라는 뜻이었다고 한다... 정말 놀랐다. 량은 평소에 되게 차갑고 조용한 사람인데, 그런 욕을 할 줄은 전혀 몰랐다...
​어쨌든 점심시간이 끝나고 다시 일했다. 일을 마치기 30분 전쯤, 수퍼바이저가 포지션을 좀 바꿔줄 수 있냐고 부탁했다. 그래서 알겠다고 하고 퇴근할 때까지 테이블 포지션에서 일했다.
​일을 마치고 콜스에 가서 쇼핑을 했다. (탈색약, 치킨 등등...) 집에 돌아와서 공원에서 운동을 했다. 거의 다 끝 나갈 때쯤 여자친구가 나를 데리러 와주었다. 같이 쇼핑을 좀 더 하고 집으로 돌아왔다. 저녁을 먹고 머리를 탈색했다. 두피가 너무 화끈거리고 아팠다, 하하!
​💡 주요 수정 포인트 팁!
​내가 계속 그걸 할까 봐 걱정됐다:
​I was worried that I might get stuck doing ~ 표현을 썼습니다. **'get stuck doing'**은 원어민들이 싫어하거나 힘든 일을 '독박 쓰다', '끼여서 계속하게 되다'라고 할 때 정말 자주 쓰는 찰떡 표현입니다.
​량의 대사 수정:
​기계 고장으로 문이 안 닫힌다는 뉘앙스를 살려 "The machine is broken, so it won't close!"로 매끄럽게 수정했습니다.